1. There are four important elements in a "Direct Mail Package"
and close attention must be paid to each: (Before anything, of
course, comes the essential "idea" since the conceptual strategy
is still key.)
a) the graphics (carrier) which must be opened by reader - i.e,
"what does it look like?"
b) the offer: the way the proposition is phrased - i.e "what's
c) the copy: the compelling description that gets the reader to
buy or act - i.e. "how is it said?"
d) the list: the targeted audience most likely willing to buy or
act - i.e. "who is it sent to?"
2. Perhaps the most important element is the list since an
excellent offer, with a striking carrier and compelling copy - if
mailed to wrong list - can be a disaster. Others belive copy is
most important, but don't let ranking bother you since each
element is important. Take all reasonable steps to get, use and
keep the most accurate and up=to-=date lists possible to increase
your margin of success. Set up a system to add names and keep'em
3. Heed "Daly's Law" - "Everything takes longer and costs more!'
So. it's wise to start project in ample time to make all elements
come together in easy manner. Use "reverse timetable" to plot
what needs to be done and when. For instance, you probably need
to order lists first. Then, don't forget the envelopes, printed
stock, other enclosures , etc. Allow time for delivery and return
action plus follow-up mailings.
4. Direct Mail is a demanding taskmaster, so if it fails it's
probably you who missed somewhere, not the medium.. If possible,
"test" some or all portions of your program so you can alter
methods if needed.
5. Writing compelling Direct Mail copy only seems simple so
don't be deceived. Heed basic principles of writing to single
person in simple, straightforward manner - yet with style. For
success, remember the 3 "S's" of successful copy are: (1)
Simplicity, (2) Sincerity, (3) Serenity. Long copy is not
necessarily bad, in fact it can outpull short copy. Focus on main
message you intend to convey. Never forget you want action to
occur...NOW. Be sure copy answers the always-asked questions:
"What's in it for me?" Always keep reader's perceived needs in
mind. Do the necessary research to determine them.
6. Closely analyze your potential markets and your offer so you
can hone lists and copy to target your approach. Though you mail
by the thousands, remember Direct Mail is more akin to a rifle
than a shotgun. Write your copy to be read by one person at a
7. Remember Direct Mail is a substitute sales representative.
Where an in-person sales representative can immediately answer
prospects' questions and overcome objections when raised, Direct
mail copy must anticipate all aspects and insure logical points
8. Incorporate an action device - coupon, order form, reply card
or envelope, phone number - to make it easy for recipient to take
desired action.. Repeatedly tell recipient what action you want
and make it simple to do. Put nothing in the way of getting an
order or response. Use all action devices cited.
9. A letter almost always works better in a Direct Mail package
than a package - even a catalog - without a letter. Don't worry
if the letter repeats what's in the catalog, brochure or order
form. It's there for a different purpose. The sales letter is a
one-to-one communications to explain and sell, to get the
recipient to act. The postscript is often the most-read part of
10. If all elements of package are good, it is imperative repeat
mailings be made. It's difficult to wear out a good list and,,
unless mailings are overdone, you can't wear out your welcome.
Let statistical probabilities and the laws of economics work in
your favor rather than allow difference about making frequent
mailings deter you. A common error is not to mail often enough or
to a wider list.
11. Keep detailed records of everything you do.. Follow a
"systems approach" so you know what happened, when and why. That
way you can repeat successes and avoid failures. Sometimes the
difference of a tenth of a percent or less is all it takes to
tune a marginal performer into a winner.
12. Study all elements of your package so you can know what's
working. Is it the price? The geography? The timing? The phrasing
of the offer? The list? The copy? The product? Which of those
myriad elements, in combination or without one element, makes the
critical difference in the return? Analyze your records closely
and continually until you know why you're winning and can repeat
13. Keep current with changing postal rules, rates, regulations
and procedures. Regularly monitor your procedures to insure
you're in full compliance. To illustrate expensive errors, a
frantic client called after the Postal Inspector visited. We can
help with postal problems.. Had he checked with us before the
visit, the $5000 per word differential postal cost and worry most
likely could have been avoided. We offer professional
authoritative postal expertise but seldom can avert unchecked
mistakes. Check in advance. (We can supply you with a checklist
of valuable postal publications upon receipt of addressed, double
stamped #10 envelope.)
14. Save, subdivide and study the good Direct Mail you get to
learn what to do - and maybe what not to do. Remember some of the
things that appeal may, in fact, be "tests" that, when results
are known, are failures. Never underestimate need for simplicity
and complete honesty.
15. People who take actions by mail are different from those who
don't. Thus it is wise to isolate them so you can easily remail
with new or different offers. Remember the axiom: "People who buy
by mail"...buy by mail...buy by mail..." Best lists are of mail
buyers of similar products or services who recently purchased in
same price range.
16. Do what's necessary to make your maill stand out, even "look
peculiar" since it has to fight all types of competition. If it
doesn't get opened, looked at, and read...there's no chance it
will bring the action you want. Clever "teaser copy" on outside
of carrier can work wonders.
17. Wise mail merchants work at differentiating between
"suspects," "prospects" and (best of all) "customers." Once they
can distinguish names on lists among those three categories they
are able to achieve cost efficiencies that novices can only
dream about. So keep good records of what happens and when it
happens with mailings to a particular list with a particular
offer. Capitalize on success.
18. Testimonials can be effective promotional tools, especially
if they're heartfelt and cogently express what the average user
might feel about a product or service.. They're even better when
offered by celebrities or persons well-known to the audience.
Treat testimonials like the jewels they are and gather more.
20. There's no such thing as a "normal" percentage of return
that's universally applicable across a wide range of products and
services but, over time and by keeping careful records you can
determine what some norms are for your offer (s). Goal then is to
"beat your best"...if only by 1/2 or 1/4 of a percent!
21. In producing Direct Mail programs these seven words may be
cliche - but only because it's true: "Nothing is as simple as it
seems." Continual care needs to be exercises at every step of the
planning and conceptual stage, though any step in the
conception-production process can become critical if close
attention isn't paid to what's happening. "To error is human."
Yes. I'm aware of the error but that's exact spelling of sign I
spotted in printer's window and I reproduce it to emphasize how
vital it is that extreme care be given to this facet of
production. Proofreading in a professional manner is essential.
22. Direct Mail Copywriter John Yeck long ago cautioned me to be
aware of these two "sinful" acronyms: KISS and CIPU. The first,
"Keep It Simple, Sweetie" describes how to tell your message,
while the second cautions us to avoid lapsing into business or
industrial jargon which "we" understand but most everyone else
doesn't. CIPU stands for "Clear If Previously Understood."
23. While the Power of Mail will long be with us (even though the
nature of the Postal Service might change) wise direct mailers
see themselves practicing in the fields of "direct Marketing" or
"Direct Response." They become knowledgeable of the synergistic
value from use of print media (magazines, space ads, newspaper
inserts, etc) as well as electronic media (radio and/ or TV) to
supplement their mail promotional efforts. The combination can be
24. Continually study and be alert to what's happening in this
dynamic medium. It may seem that not much is new, when in fact,
there are subtle but important shifts in many of the areas
delineated in each of the four elements cited in Principle #1.
(Our seminars, workshops and speeches point these out to